Friday, 29 May 2020

Heres my invitation to jeff

4 comments:

  1. Hi Vincey its Felix from Room 8 I like your Invite to Jeff. I loved all the bright colours Maybe next time put full stops and try not to repeat your self. Blog You Later ><
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  2. Hi, I'm in Room 8 and my name is Quan. I think you did good with your
    story invitation but you need to not put the dark blue and red because it makes it hard to read. But Jeff wood go to the birthday party anyway. Are you enjoying the story?

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  3. Kia Ora Vincey, i think that's really funny.
    I like the part were it says "hey Jeff you wanna go to my birthday !FULL STOP! There's gonna fun things at my birthday" Colleens a bit bossy saying hey you got a invitation come.
    Thanks for your post and cheek out my blog at Caleb @ Owairaka District School



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  4. Kia Ora Vincey. My name is Stephen from Room 23.
    I think that's really cool and funny. I like the part were it says hey Jeff you wanna go to my birthday!FULL STOP!There's gonna have fun things ate my birthday. Colleens a bit bossy saying hey you got a invitation come.
    Thanks for showing your post and check out my blog post there's only one so far because I'm still working on putting more on my blog so
    Blog you later.
    You should check out my blog My blog
    bye

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